From f04645e5ab968052d2d442d318ba164076378e2c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bob Mottram Date: Sun, 13 Dec 2015 09:59:41 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Wording --- doc/EN/index.org | 4 ++-- website/EN/index.html | 6 +++--- 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/EN/index.org b/doc/EN/index.org index 0bf58ed3..185ae506 100644 --- a/doc/EN/index.org +++ b/doc/EN/index.org @@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ #+END_CENTER -With the right technology the internet can be a space for free expression, exploration, cooperation, learning and fun. A place to connect with others are share experiences. It doesn't have to be a gloomy surveillance prison owned and run by a diabolical synthesis of money-grabbing megacorporations and prurient government spooks. Freedombone is designed to help you surmount the contemporary digital privacy conundrums and to increase your online autonomy. It's a self-hosted home server configuration which can be installed onto any computer capable of running Debian, so if you have an old laptop or netbook which you can leave turned on then you can use Freedombone to provide your own internet services, such as blogging, wiki, email, chat and social networking and have independence from the well known internet companies. +With the right technology the internet can be a space for free expression, exploration, cooperation, learning and fun. A place to connect with others are share experiences. It doesn't have to be a gloomy surveillance prison owned and run by a diabolical synthesis of money-grabbing megacorporations and prurient government spooks. Freedombone is designed to help you surmount the contemporary digital privacy conundrums and to increase your online autonomy. It's a self-hosted home server configuration which can be installed onto any computer capable of running [[https://www.debian.org/][Debian]], so if you have an old laptop or netbook which you can leave turned on then you can use Freedombone to provide your own internet services, such as blogging, wiki, email, chat and social networking and have independence from the well known internet companies. -This is personal or family scale computing, but with the ability to federate and help to collectively construct a global /community controlled infrastructure/. +This is personal or family scale computing, which can then federate to global proportions. We need /community controlled/ information systems infrastructure and that can be achieved by making it simple to install and maintain. #+ATTR_HTML: :border -1 | [[./variants.html][Variants]] | [[./installation.html][Installation]] | [[./usage.html][How to use it]] | [[file:backups.html][Backups]] | [[./code.html][Code]] | [[./related.html][Related Projects]] | [[file:faq.html][FAQ]] | [[file:support.html][Contact/Support]] | [[https://www.gnu.org/licenses/gpl-3.0-standalone.html][License]] | diff --git a/website/EN/index.html b/website/EN/index.html index 75a75f48..d44069a9 100644 --- a/website/EN/index.html +++ b/website/EN/index.html @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ - + @@ -162,11 +162,11 @@ for the JavaScript code in this tag.

-With the right technology the internet can be a space for free expression, exploration, cooperation, learning and fun. A place to connect with others are share experiences. It doesn't have to be a gloomy surveillance prison owned and run by a diabolical synthesis of money-grabbing megacorporations and prurient government spooks. Freedombone is designed to help you surmount the contemporary digital privacy conundrums and to increase your online autonomy. It's a self-hosted home server configuration which can be installed onto any computer capable of running Debian, so if you have an old laptop or netbook which you can leave turned on then you can use Freedombone to provide your own internet services, such as blogging, wiki, email, chat and social networking and have independence from the well known internet companies. +With the right technology the internet can be a space for free expression, exploration, cooperation, learning and fun. A place to connect with others are share experiences. It doesn't have to be a gloomy surveillance prison owned and run by a diabolical synthesis of money-grabbing megacorporations and prurient government spooks. Freedombone is designed to help you surmount the contemporary digital privacy conundrums and to increase your online autonomy. It's a self-hosted home server configuration which can be installed onto any computer capable of running Debian, so if you have an old laptop or netbook which you can leave turned on then you can use Freedombone to provide your own internet services, such as blogging, wiki, email, chat and social networking and have independence from the well known internet companies.

-This is personal or family scale computing, but with the ability to federate and help to collectively construct a global community controlled infrastructure. +This is personal or family scale computing, which can then federate to global proportions. We need community controlled information systems infrastructure and that can be achieved by making it simple to install and maintain.